Thursday, December 17, 2009

Can you use dialogue as a spark for your stories?

I think so. In fact, I have used this technique before. I read about this, but can't remember where. Sheesh, I really need to write down when I read something, where I read it. Anyway.

Decide here and now that to be a really great writer you must become a really great listener. Listen to conversations between your kids. Write down only sentences that one of the children say. Then look at the words. Dismiss character and situation. Just look at the words you jotted down. Do you see hints now? Hints at what the dialogue can become? For instance, say one of the lines you wrote down reads like this. Where are they at? Where. Hmmm, all kinds of interesting possibilities. Where. What if a nervous neighbor shouted that word to you over the phone? Or they hollered that word on a dark side road? Where. It's leading me somewhere. To some place.

Forget that your child ever said that sentence. Isolate the word. Then take the word and write it down. Tape it close to your computer. Say it over and over. Where, where, where. Write the word on an index card. Turn the card over and write down your first thought. Now grab another card and write down another thought. Work as fast as you can. You'll be surprised at what you'll see. :)

29 comments:

  1. Completely off topic, but I *love* this blog background! Beautiful!!

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  2. Neat idea! I can't wait to try it, especially since I love all things notecard related. :0)

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  3. Sounds like a brainstorming session of sorts. Neat!

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  4. Oooh. Interesting idea. I like it. Thanks for the tip. I do love great dialogue, so any ideas to make mine even better is always helpful.

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  5. Kristi, It is and I love anything notecardish too. :)

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  6. Great thoughts and tips! I love using dialogue to enrich a story. Love the way it moves action forward, too. Blessings! :)

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  7. Karen, Me too. Sometimes I use too much. Like yesterday. I thought I was writing a story with all dialogue. Now I have to go back and fill in. :)

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  8. Yes! Yes! Starbucks! Yes! Duncan Donuts! Yes!

    I think dialogue, in many cases, is the key in writing. The dialogue should snap, snark a little, and accurately portray the characters. Oh, and realistic, must be realistic.

    I listen in on conversations all the time. Sorry, it's a writerly thing. : ) My only problem: one time I was eavesdropping on a conversation during intermission at the theater that was absolutely hysterical and I burst out laughing. THe woman looks at me, smiles, and then we both burst out laughing cause the story she'd been telling her friend was that funny. I think I cried I laughed so hard. Anyhow, if eavesdropping, try not to burst into hysterical laughter.

    Great post.

    S

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  9. Great exercise, it's pregnant with all sorts of possibilities!

    Thanks Robyn! Where, where, where?

    (Nestled in the darkness of the den, penchant for another shot of whiskey. Whirling the empty glass between his fingers.) Fun!

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  10. Scott, she mystically makes him forget that he even drinks coffee. He now has one cup of hot chocolate and calls it Joe. :)

    And I never act like I'm listening. That lady wasn't laughing with you. Ahahahahaaha

    Seriously, never, never let on that you can hear the other person. :)

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  11. Tamika, I love that. That is a thing of beauty. Especially the whirling of the glass. Love it. :)

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  12. Robyn - I like to mix hot chocolate in with my coffee!!! Oh, you would have been laughing too if you heard the story. It was hysterical. I tried so hard not to laugh, but couldn't help myself. It was just one of those thangs!

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  13. Uh, not any more you don't. For I have wielded the mystical, make him forget power on you. NOW I can get ideas. Lots of ideas. Bwa ha ha ha ha

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  14. Great post! I love dialogue--but my characters kind of talk for themselves to that makes my life really easy. But back when I was in writing school we were actually assigned to eavesdrop. Once a week for a few weeks we had to sit somewhere for a half hour and write down everything we heard. It was weird at first, but very helpful (and it was amazing to hear the things people talk about in public. Definitely made me decide to be a little more careful about what I say--you never know who's listening!) :)

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  15. Great post, Robyn! I find that the more I write, the more I am able to find things that inspire me. I used to be much more narrow in the things that I wrote about, and now, like with a line of dialog, little things can start big projects, as long as they are interesting. :)

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  16. Shannon, I too love dialogue. And I probably use it more than I should.

    That assignment sounds interesting. I bet you overheard A LOT. I have noticed that folks just don't seem to care what they say in public. Unlike me. Being a writer I really watch what I say, because like you mentioned, you never know who is listening. :0)

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  17. Who are you again? Why am I following this blog? Hmmm, looks like somebody's magic wand backfired! Ha! Mmmmmm, smell the coffee!

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  18. HA HA HA! Like you don't know! I AM YOUR WORST IDEA GETTIN' NIGHTMARE. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    My ideas NEVER backfire. Oh boy. I am getting another idea. But I'll just let it be a SURPRISE!

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  19. Awesome idea, Robyn. I've never done that. I will definitely give it a try.

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  20. Oh, I like this exercise! Excellent.

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  21. That is very good. Sometimes it all comes down to a single word, doesn't it. Try to explain that one to a non-writer. When I'm stuck, I can open any book at random and find a word, Our and it's enough. Maybe I look for five minutes, but their there.

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  22. Susan, thanks and it is fun to do. It really does help. :)

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  23. I'm so nosy, I always use dialogue to spark a story! Or a character. Fun!

    Have a great weekend!

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  24. One of my favorite spots is a big oversized chair at the mall. It's located just below the escalator, and you can overhear everything. I've heard some interesting tales while sitting in that chair!

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  25. This is a really interesting post, Robyn. I absolutely think that dialogue alone can spark a story. When i wrote my first play, i wrote a random dialogue that popped into my head between a character and a barman and it helped shape my charater and the direction of my story. Since then i've tried to really grasp the focus of my main character's dialogue and it helps me flesh them out, come to life. I find that the story naturally falls in to place from there. :)

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