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This made me smile. I wonder if anyone has ever done a picture book of haikus about animals. If not, we need one!
I think there are. But there might be room for more. Thanks, my friend.
Love it, Robyn. The near-rhyme of 'crocodile's domicile' is clever.
Hey Sally. Thank you. I hoped someone would comment on that.
Lyrical! Great to have you as part of the Poetry Friday Community. Welcome!
Nice! Made me think of the Florida Crocodile's in the grassy canals.
Nice! Made me think of Lee's book Alligators Overheard. I know this is about crocodiles- but the words got my mind thinking in all different directions. Beautiful in its simplicity. :) ~Jess
Short and sweet! Happy to meet you!
Is this the beginning of an adventure or (gulp) the end of one?? Thanks for sharing your haiku, Robyn!
Youve got gerate visuals there my friend! Really wild. Thanks for sharing! :)
Nicely done, Robyn!
Hi Robyn - yes .. those eyes ... they are stationary til they move mighty fast ... and those teethly pegs ... this is a delightful Friday poem .. cheers Hilary
So nice to see you join Poetry Friday, Robyn. Love your haiku!
I, too, love the sound of "crocodile's domocile!" Welcome to Poetry Friday!
Ooh! Very nice! Love the way the words flow together, and the rhythm they create -- not to mention that perfect image! (AND the fact that the banner even matches the topic!)
Really well done!
Good going! You're a gifted poet!
Cool poem, Robyn...made me look behind me! :)Are you keeping up with MOP? I'm several days behind already. Gah!!Have a good weekend, dear! xoxox
Welcome to Poetry Friday! I agree with several others- crocodile domicile is just about as close to perfect word choice as you can come! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
So much said with so little!
Welcome, Robyn! Your tiny poem packed a wallop!
Nice poem, Robyn.
Wonderful, Robyn!!!! And welcome to Poetry Friday. They are such a supportive bunch :-)
Nice work. Welcome!
Love the pairing of crocodile and domicile--fun to say!
Welcome to the Poetry Friday community! You certainly arrived with a snap and a shiver!
Hi there Robyn! Welcome to Poetry Friday - I wouldn't want to see those glaring eyes though! :)
That's a great haiku!It gives a wonderful feelthat makes you turn 'round!~Erik:D
Very nice, but the orange is hard on my eyes. I'm fighting the flu so just about everything is. :(
Oooh. A "Dunn, dunnn, dunnnnnnnn" ending! Cool.Snaps fingers in praise.
*gulp* I love how quickly you build this. Each line increases the tension, and I find myself mentally standing in the swampland of Florida, wondering if I can run fast enough.
I find myself tiptoeing away... I read that they can run pretty fast on land. So yeah, I'd be running.
I like this one! I really need to try this. You inspire me! :) xo
Hi Robyn. How nice to find you dipping a toe in the Poetry Friday waters! Fortunately, no glaring crocodile eyes here. Looking forward to seeing more from you in the coming weeks.
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